2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；词汇不够丰富，且文中有拼写错误；句式变化不明显，另外要多多加强从句在文中的比例。

If my foregin friend comes to my hometown,I will take him to the Mountain Heng.The mountain Heng is very famous in the world. because of its unique Buddhist culture and beautiful environment ,the wild animal and so on. There is no denying that the montain Heng is the first choose .But my hometown is so wide and the interestingplace