2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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If my foreign friend comes to my hometown,I will take him to the Mountain Heng.The mountain Heng is very famous in the world.Because of its unique Buddhist culture and beautiful environment ,the wild animal and so on. There is no denying that the mountain Heng is the first choose .But my hometown is so widely and there are many interestingplace can we choose. In my hometown,the Stone Drum Academy has long histry,we can experience the atmosphere of ancientbooks.And appreciate the ancient architectural style.