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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):幸福之路

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:08浏览次数:4831
要求:
Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on happiness by referring to the saying "Happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal with them." You can cite examples to illustrate your point and then explain how you can develop your ability to deal with problems and be happy. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
用户的作文(系统评分81.0分
评语:

作者句法很棒,合理使用了复杂句;文章词汇表达丰富,高级词汇积累做的也很棒;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。

用户练习作文:

The Way to Happiness   When it comes to the topic of “happiness” the opinions of people usually distinguish from each other which give rise to the heated discussion among the public concerning the way to achieve happiness. As the saying goes “Happiness is not the absence of problems but the ability to deal with them.” I personally agree that the ability to cope with complications in life is the right path of pursing happiness.   However how could we deal with daily troubles or even struggles could generate serious concerns. From my perspective to begin with individuals optimism could perform an essential character. According to a survey conducted in certain institution in China the percent of people with optimistic attitudes far out weighs the opposite in the aspects of overcoming dilemmas thus having better opportunity to achieve the sense of happiness.   In addition in terms of the society certain institutions in China should launch relevant campaigns to strengthen the emphasis putting on the resolving of a problem not the way trying to avoid it or even to neglect it. In spite of the fact that this may be a long run these methods of coping with problems could definitely contribute to happiness in our consistent efforts.

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