采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;句式变化多样;文章词汇使用多样性不足,且单词拼写错误较多。
Most of people is like to give a conclusion after they watched a TV programe or cinema, their opinion is like it , hate it ,sympathy it and so on. in the fact,they didnot know the really truth,sometime they just base on self felling, it is not professional opinion,they just like to criticism comments ,or they are fully agree it. for my opinion,becasue the social is became complex,maybe some of people hope to became a famous people,they lend the internet to spread his name and his activity , that a lot of people can see his event,that you can give your comments.
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