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it is unwise to make a conclution while watching or listening something right now. As the old saying goes,"watching is real",however,it isn't alway true. There are some reasons to share with you. if a person often wear old and out-dated clothes,others maybe think he is a greatly poor person,but in fact, he just pays little attention to dress,and he is a milionaire.
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