文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,高级词汇使用稍显不足;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误。
My favourite Teacher is coming from Singapore.His name is Jonathon.He is a generous and kindness man.His career is financial clerk.he love to drink red wines,However he can't drink more because of his waist disease. We often get together and discuss how to improve our life through effords and enjoy our life.What is more that he often teach us how to study english and open our mouth to pronounce.I love to get along with him,It is a amazing time.