正确句子比例较高,适当增加复杂句的使用,文章会更出色;作者词汇表达较为熟练,高级词汇使用不是很多;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。
My favourite Teacher is coming from Singapore.His name is Jonathon.He is a generous and kind man.His career is financial clerk.he love to drink red wines.However he can't drink more because of his waist sickness. We often get together and discuss how to improve our life through efforts and enjoy our life.What is more that he often teach us how to study English and open our mouth to pronounce.I love to get along with him,it is an amazing time.