文章用了较为丰富的词汇,高级词汇略显单薄,同时注意单词拼写的检查;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词;增加一些从句的使用。
In our daily life,it is very normal we make a conclusion when we saw something or listened something. For.example.when we see one man shout about his wife,we may thought that he didint love his wife.but actully ,he love his wife .he angry just his wife do the dangerous things,he.was very worried.in.another way,if.someone tell you a bad thing about your best friend.did youchoice to.believe.or not.if you.believe that is truth,buy the fact.is oppsite,you.will break tbe.frienfdship with your friend.so can you.make a conclusion when you just saw a little thing or listened somenthing?Actually not,in my opinion,when you make a.conclusion you should concern that its true or not.because sometimes.the eye the ear will cheat.with.you.and make.you.cant.make.the.right.conclusion.
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