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句式变化多样；文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词；文中能较好的使用一些高级词汇，不过单词拼写方面要继续努��。
It's unwise to put all eggs in one basket means that you should do several preperation in your life instead of spend all your time and energe in one thing. First a lot of people insist that it's necessery to try all of your best to do a thing when you nwant to succeed. Much of them are usually used to thinking that if someone seperate their effort and time from several different things, he or she will get into trouble and even faliure. Second, as chinese ,there are still some traditional conservetive parents always insist on teaching their children how to concentrate on one thing which is they choose before. so it seems a culture of educational in our country. Oppsite to the above points, I think we should leant to try different thing in life and all of us have right to choose our lifetyle or work. This is 21 century, we have more chance and more choice than old social. we can take us time to do a lot of thing what is interesting.life is full of choice everywhere, but we don't must be given one respond.if you did't arrive success in one thing, It's nothing and unimportant, there is another thing, try you bset , you may success. In a word, it's unwise to put all your resources in one thiing, enjoy life ,enjoy different challenge,you must come ture your dream in the end. It's well konw that if you turn another route, you may fing more beautiful sight.
