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过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；很好的运用了从句，但部分句子稍有瑕疵；作者在高级词汇方面还有很大的空间，还要注意单词拼写。
It's unwise to put all eggs in one basket tell us that you should do several plans in your life rather than spend all your time and energe in one thing. First a lot of people insist that it's necessary to try all of your best to do a thing when you nwant to succeed. Much of them think that if someone seperate their effort and time from several different things, he or she will get into trouble and even failure. Second, as chinese ,there are still some traditional conservative parents always insist on teaching their children how to concentrate on one thing which is they choose before. so it seems a culture of education in our country. Oppsite to the above points, I think we should leant to try different things in life and all of us have right to choose our lifetyle or work. This is 21 century, we have more chances and more choices of choices here and there, but we don't must be given one respond.if you didn't success in one thing, It's nothing and unimportant, there is another thing, try you bset , you may success. In a word, it's unwise to put all your resources in one thiing, enjoy life ,enjoy different challenge,you must come true your dream in the end. It's well konw that if you turn another route, you may fing more beautiful sight.
