2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

拼写很棒，可适当增加高级词汇的使用；文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用；过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。

Putting all egg in one basket is not clever.In our life there are many "eggs",such as energy,money,time and so on.Even though we devote ourselves into one situation,we can also spread energy in another.As we konw, many people are crazy about investing,they put their all money into investing and result in losing all money.Similarly,the others also deserve this saying.Students don't be allow to spend his whole time studying the subject they favorite.Adults won't spend their whole life working endlessly.They will exercise and read,enjoy the time with family.If a student just put his attention into one subject,he can't get a excellent score as well as people who spend them life in one way,they can't enjoy colorful life.Whatever kind of eggs we have,we can put it all kind of baskets,and then I will harvest differently.