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In our daily life,it is very normal and easily to draw a conclusion when we saw something or listened something. But something it isn't all trues what we saw or heared.So,it is a great pbolem . For.example.when we see one man shout about his wife,we may thought that he didint love his wife.but actully ,he love his wife . the reason why he angry just his wife do the dangerous things,he.was very worried about his wife.so ,it seems that we shouldn't draw a conclusion when we just see the supertical.In another wayS,if someone tell you a bad thing about your best friend.did you choice to believe or not.if you chose to believe ,but the fact is oppsite,you.will break tbe.frienfdship with your friend.so can you.draw a conclusion when you just saw a little thing or heared somenthing? Actually not,in my opinion,when you draw a conclusion you should concern that its true or not.because sometimes the eye and the ear will cheat with you.
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