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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第43篇:独自一人学习还是跟朋友一块儿

发布时间:2013-08-16 17:19浏览次数:1788
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作文题目:

Some students prefer to study alone. Others prefer to study with a group of students. Which do you prefer?

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

一些学生喜欢自己一个人学习,而另外一些学生喜欢结伴学习。你更喜欢哪种呢?给出具体原因和例子。

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采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间;简单句稍微有点多,可适当增加从句使用。

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Nowadays, education has become a hot topic in our daily life. The means of study are divided into two segment , one is study alone and another one id study in groups. Many students think study with groups is more efficiently while i think study alone is better than the former. To begin with, as a students we cannot rule ourselves well. When we study with our best friends we may started to talking about something else with studying . In my own point , i think it is a waste of time but not the improving of the efficient .And i think studying alone can avoide such a trouble.Because when we study alone we have no one to talk to so that we may pay more attention to focus one what we learn . Secondly, while we are discussing in the groups we may have a feeling of dependent, and we will rely on our teammate. What this result is become less individual and even have no our own idaes. But we can combat the problems by studying alone, it is because when we studying alone we have no one to depend on. In conclusion, as all of the evidence showed above i have preference for studying alone maybe better.

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