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I'm glad to share my opinion about the comparison between country life and city life.I will compare thatfrom the following two aspects. First,in the aspect of food,there are various differences between city and country.For example,there are all kinds of restaurants in the city and many people are accustomed to buy fast food and take out for to the contrast,people in the country prefer to prepare"home-style" meal.In addition,they eat the green vegetables they plant for their income is and transportation is not convenient. Second,people's daily activities are also in difference.People in the city seem to have time to enjoy.They always take part in sports activities ,go shopping,see movies and so on to relax ourselves.however,people live in country are quiet living without so many recreation.To our surprise,city people are relatively unfamiliar even neighbors maybe don't know each other while country people seem to be enthusiastic and are willing to help others.I hold the view this is about the extent of busyness. Third,transportation is largely influence people’s life.Transportation in city is so busy that people are always stuck in traffic,which makes people are confused.The reason why country’s life sounds very slow and quiet is that there are few cars and the cars’ horn. Although,the life in country or city are not the same,they enjoy their own lives and everyone is happy everyday.
