题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
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With an increasing development of this modern society, many a tempting things like title,money and power,is faced by the public ,which leads to a crisis of trust in a wide range field ,for example, interpersonal communication ,business trade and food security .In this case, being sincere and maintaining trust become a vital need for all walks of life, in particular to each individual. As is acknowledged,a lack of trust has caused a series of social problems,and even leads to an increase number of crimes,which is the main reason that our society becomes unsteady and unsafe .First of all ,one of those issues,which is also more serious and harmful to humankind,is food security.Sequential reports on food safety problems has aroused a public awareness of regulating the market and placing much importance on establishment of a trust-able society.In some case,the importance attached to the trust depends greatly on the publication by the way of TV commercial,paper advertisement and billboard. Meanwhile,education on the trust in school plays a key part in building up a sincere and true relationship among the public .With good knowledge of the importance of trust ,our society is able to be a pure heaven where there is no cheating,concealing and harm to each other,as a result, there will be a happier world for us to live in with a mutual trust. As far as i am concerned, fundamental education on sincerity and trust to others is quite needed .Besides,our government ought to work out some regulations and laws to rule and tailor the social market .In my wish,there can be a trustful safe and harmonious society as long as all of us pitch in with joint efforts.