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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
简单句偏多了；请作者提高词汇表达丰富度，另外请加强单词拼写的检查；语言不流畅。
Form:hubin@163.com To:KPOHsales@hotmail.com title:We expect that estabish business relationship. Dear Sir or Madame I knew your company new product of NO.5670 in exhibition held New York during Dec.15th to 22srd and I was very interest it.Please send a price list and instruction for us.Thanks for your corprat,We expect that estabish business relationship. sinserly:hubin
