2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

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It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket,in fact ,it is easy to understand why it is unwise ,we can image ,if the basket was falled that all eggs will be damaged. if you are wise,you should consider how to reduce this risk,you might consider more detail preventation action.such as you are invente shock ,after you reference 3 or 5 shocks name, the last you should by one or two or three shocks ,it is very important,if you just put your all money into one shock name, that you may bear a big risk, it was directly effect your successful and failure.it is necessary to seperate your money on the different shocks.especially for 21 centuries ,you should have many of opportunity to develop your business,it is important to manage your money, that we can related to avoid all eggs put in one basket .