文章衔接手法恰当;文中从句数量过少;作者词汇量偏小,另外文章有些单词拼写错误。
I have a good friend.His name is Mike,he is ten years old.He is my classmate,he is tall,he comes from America,his English is very good,so he can help improve my English level.He is very kind,I like stay with him all time,we often play game in zhongshan park. There are three people in his family.His father is a doctor,his mother is a teacher.they all like Mike very much.