采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;文中一些从句的使用为文章增色;文中词汇较灵活,但要注意积累高级词汇,拼写错误也要注意。
As the scientific technology develop rapidly,we can learn many information from TV ,online ,newspapers and mobile phone .However, not all of them are what we want to accept. The information is so considerate that we lost in the ocean of the information .we just accept various information which are provided by outside without any purpose.Many of them is merely useless information which will be forgotton in the future.It is a mistake to confound information with knowledge . As we all perceive that we live in the world which assum information explosion,the irony is that a wealth of information creates a poverty of attention. If we want to avoid being distarct by irrelevant information,we must erect the aim to distinguish the knowledge which are useful for us from the information.As the Sherlock Holmes the character in Doyle Conan's work said "a fool takes in all the lumber of every sort that he come across,so that the knowledge which might be useful to gets crowded out"