采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;作者句法知识较为扎实,可增加复合句和从句使用;作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇,建议要多使用高级词汇。
As the scientific technology develops rapidly,we can learn much information from TV ,online ,newspapers and mobile phone .However, not all of them are what we want to accept. The information is so considerate that we lost in the ocean of information .we just accept various information which are provided by outside without any purpose.Many of them is merely useless information which will be forgotton in the future.It is a mistake to confound information with knowledge. As we all perceive that we live in the world which assum information explosion,the irony is that a wealth of information creates a poverty of attention. If we want to avoid being distracted by irrelevant information,we must erect the aim to distinguish the knowledge which is useful for us from the information.As the Sherlock Holmes the character in Doyle Conan's work said "a fool takes in all the lumber of every sort that he come across,so that the knowledge which might be useful to him gets crowded out".