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拼写很棒，可适当增加高级词汇的使用；作者句法基础不错，可适当增加复杂句的使用；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅。
As the scientific technology develops rapidly, we can learn much information from TV, online, newspapers and mobile phone .However, not all of them are what we want to accept. The information is so considerate that we lost in the ocean of information .We just accept various information which is provided by outside without any purpose. Many of them are merely useless information which will be forgotten in the future. It is a mistake to confound information with knowledge. As we all perceive that we live in the world which assume information explosion，the irony is that a wealth of information creates a poverty of attention. If we want to avoid being distracted by irrelevant information, we must erect the aim to distinguish the knowledge which is useful for us from the information. As the Sherlock Holmes the character in Doyle Conan's work said "a fool takes in all the lumber of every sort that he comes across, so that the knowledge which might be useful to him gets crowded out".
