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In China,there's a saying that "The landscape of Guilin tops that of any other place under heaven." In light of this, Overlooking the Li Jiang River,Guilin is located in thengxi. The name was derived from the cassia trees of the location. The trees line the streets of the town with yellow flowers blossoming every September,filling the air with sweet scent.