托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第25篇:人们的成功是否只与努力工作有关与运气无关

文章结构严谨，有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分；丰富从句的使用，文章会更出色；作者在高级词汇方面要多下功夫，有些单词拼错了。

In contemporary society, succeed has become a definetion of the man who deserves to be. But how we get succeed is more significant . The majorities think that all about succeed is hardworking and luck has nothing to do with success, but in my own piont i do not totally agree with it . Addmittedly, hard working truelly play a important role in our succeed , may be the most part. Because all of the determinations and every ideals are based one hardworking. For instance, one of my friends is really work hard, what she did is just about her job, from day to night, and she almost has no time to shopping with other girls or just even have ten minutes off. And needless to say, she make great progress in everything and finally become succeed in THAT definetion. However, to say luck has nothing to do with success is a overstatement. On account you cannot catch the oppotunaties without a good luck, and all of your hardworking will be nothing. Take myself for example, i can do well in a lot of thing but i have nowhere to use it until oneday my boss ask me to do something that other prople cannot do well in, and i complete it perfectly. Can say my succeed is because of my hardworking, the answer should be no, i cannot be value without doubt. So according to all of the evidences above, i am not one hundred per cent agree with the statement mentioned in the topic.