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2006年考研英语作文真题:盲目的崇拜

发布时间:2013-05-20 21:57浏览次数:2862
要求:
题目 盲目的崇拜(题目自拟)
说明 Study the following photos carefully and write an essay of 160~200 words
要求
1.describe the photos briefly
2.interpret the social phenomenon reflected by them
3.give your point of view

字数:200满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分67.0分
评语:

文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但高级词汇稍显不足;若注意一些句子错误,文章会更漂亮。

用户练习作文:

As we can see from this two photos,a man written the name of Beckham on his face because he like Beckham frenzy.Another men was spending 300 yuan on his hair just for making a same hairstyle with Beckham. How crazy they are!This photos ,at first,convey a deep concern about Beckham who is a famous star of football.they also imply what people have a blind adore to the stars on the more and more developed society. When it comes to say adore,I have to admit the truth that not only it is not harmful for people,but also is benefiting what people learn some good thing from the model.While some people do so much meaningless thing that lead to become blind.People should be educated how rightly adore the famous person.If we do it,those frenzy actions would reduce.

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