字数:200满分:100分
文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;文章在句法方面做的很棒,从句和复杂句的使用不错;文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但高级词汇稍显不足。
As we can see from those two photos,a man written the name of Beckham on his face because of he like Beckham frenzy.Another man was spending 300 yuan on his hair just for making a same hairstyle with Beckham. How crazy they are!Those photos,at first,convey a deep concern about Beckham who is a famous star.They also imply what people have a blind adore to the stars on the more and more developed society. When it comes to say about adoring,I have to admit the truth that not only it is not harmful to people,but also is benefiting what people learn some good things from the model.But some people do so much meaningless thing that leads to become blind.People should be educated what rightly adored the famous person.If we do it,those frenzy actions would reduce.