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文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨；句法知识较好，但需加强句式变化；作者平时练习中应扩充词汇量，注意几处拼写错误。
As we all known, many northern cities in our country is destoyed seriously by haze weather. what's worse, it effected inconvenience and damage. Considering all the bad influence of it, I Want to offer some suggestions to solve these problem as soon as possoible. First of all, we must form a kind of awareness about environmental protection from the little things around. Secondly, governmental agencies should introduce policies to control the behavior effected the weather. finelly, our scientists can study the machine that is benefit our weather. In a word, environmental protection need each one involved in it.
