题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;作者高级词汇使用比较准确,词汇表达较丰富,但仍需增加词汇积累;文章层次较为清晰。
The danger of computer theft is increasing.Government agencies, large corporations, and small business are using them frequently.They use them to maintain important records which include pay statements and inventories and employees’ personal data such as names,addresses.Computer theft means changing computer records illegally to transfer to yourself money and stealing personal information to set up false identities.Computer theft losses run to billions of dollars a year.For every computer crime discovered,ten go undetected,which the staggering losses occur because computer owners are ignorant.