小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；文中词汇表达稍欠丰富，可是单词拼写做的不错；建议在衔接词汇方面加强积累。

My best friend is LinTao. He is 10 years old.His favourit pet is dog.He likes playing football.I go to his family every weekend.We used to watch TV and play computer games.We feel so happy for being together.We had found a dog cried from day to night .It shouted "Wang Wang Wang Wang "