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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第46篇:是否每个人都有接受高等教育的权力

发布时间:2013-08-16 17:30浏览次数:3022
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

One argument states that higher education should be open to everyone, regardless of background. The opposing argument says that only the elite students should be allowed to proceed.

Discuss these ideas. Explain why.

是否每个人都有接受高等教育的权力。你的看法是?并给出解释。

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It is known to all that a college education is a must for all young people in the society.However,unfortunately,the university is open only to those who have better academic achievements in high school.In my opinion,the higher education should be available to all students. And my reasons are as follows. First of all,it's unfair that higher education is denied to the less capable students.There's no denying that students'academic achievements are influenced by a number of factors.As the facilities and teaching methods are totally different,students can't study in equal condition.What's more,a student's achivements can be affected by his or her home environment or family financial pressure.Some less capable students can benefit from higher education if given the same opportunities.Last but not least,when all students can be admitted to the colleges,the intellectual standard of the whole nation will be raised.A better educated population contributes a great deal to our country. As it mentioned above,I suppose that higher education should be available to all students.Only when every person is given the opportunity to enter the college will the society be able to develop rapidly.

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