题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者应适量增加从句的使用量;作者能较灵活地使用词汇,高级词汇使用较恰当,但存在一些拼写错误。
On maintaining trust It is very important to on maintaining trust in our daily life, trust is be need in everywhere, trust can help you to bulid a friendship, trust can help your business success and so on. But now, while the economy was develop rapidly, people are consider money more than trust, which make the society and the market lack of sincere, thus they can't achieve what they want. How can we make our society are full of trust. To start with, we should require ourself be trust in the daily life, thus can influence other people. Secondary, we should on maintaing trust to each people. Trust is a moral, which is good for us to build a harmony society.