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Fireworks Shouldn’t Be Allowed for Spring Festival Celebrations Spring festival is known as the most important traditional festival of China, dating back to ancient times. Therefore, Chinese people festoon their houses with paper scrolls and let off fireworks to greet the arrival of New Year. Some people hold the idea that spring festival would never be the same without fireworks, however, with the consciousness of safety and environmental protection been improved, the others argue that the ways to celebrate the days should be changed. As for me, the latter can be a wise choice. On the one hand, lighting fireworks can cause serious injuries. From a survey recently, the injury and death toll caused by Spring Festival fireworks in Beijing hit 307, which is a tremendous date. Keeping away from fireworks ensures you are in a safe condition when New Year is coming. On the other hand, some shoddy fireworks also cause much pollution and those trends to annoy people around the place fireworks lighted. When fireworks let off to the sky, all the poisonous gas will be discharged everywhere and then the ground will be covered by the residue. To sum up, although letting off firecrackers is part of Chinese tradition and we do want joy of the celebration, but do we also desire clean air for our health and safety guarantee for thousands of families? I’m sure the answer you give is absolutely yes. We hope that we will have a greater time for Spring Festival with safety and clean air instead of fireworks.