2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；从句和复杂句用的不错，但部分句子还有一些小问题；文中拼写错误比较多，用词也稍显贫乏。

it's unwise to put all eggs in one basket,there are two reasons for what I said.firstly,we put all egges in one basket,if the basket was drop on the ground,then all eggs were broken,so it isunwise,secondly,put all eggs in one basket just like we have only one way to think everthing,it's unwise.absolutely,if everyone have one way to sovle the problem,then we don't have imagenation,the develope of social will not improve,so I think it's unwise to put all eggs in one basket.