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what happened in china really change our life,especially beween our's age and parents'.In my parents' chilhood,most of them have srveral bothers and sisters, the older ususlly take the responsibility of attending others kids,act as "father" or "mother".On poor material condition,accept high education is a luxurious thing unless your family is rich enough.