采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;作者应适量增加从句的使用量;文中词汇表达较为丰富准确,但存在单词拼写错误。
What happened in china really change our life,especially beween our's age and parents'.In my parents' childhood,most of them have srveral bothers and sisters, the older ususlly take the responsibility of attending other kids,act as "father" or "mother".On poor material condition,receiving high education is a luxurious thing unless your family is rich enough. Compared to my childhood,the life is absolutly brighter than former,for which the economic develop quickly and our material life is more abundant.Most family can live a so comfortable life that not struggle for food .