2005年1月英语四级作文真题:学生会竞选演讲

恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒；作者应适量增加从句的使用量；文中词汇表达较为丰富准确，但存在单词拼写错误。

What happened in China really change our life,especially beween our's age and parents'.In my parents' childhood,most of them have srveral bothers and sisters, the older ususlly take the responsibility of looking after other kids,act as "father" or "mother".On poor material condition,receiving high education is a luxurious thing unless your family is rich enough. Compared to my childhood,the life is absolutely brighter than former,for which the economic boom and our material life is more abundant.Most familys can live a so comfortable life that not struggle for food .