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2005年1月英语四级作文真题:学生会竞选演讲

发布时间:2013-05-17 00:14浏览次数:1478
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1 你认为自己具备是什么条件(能力,性格,爱好)可以胜任学生会主席工作,   
2 如果当选你将会为本校同学做什么? 
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能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒;语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇,建议要多使用高级词汇。

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What happened in China really change our life,especially beween our's age and parents'.In my parents' childhood,most of them have several bothers and sisters, the older ususlly take the responsibility of looking after other kids,act as "father" or "mother".On poor material condition,receiving high education is a luxurious thing unless your family is rich enough. Compared to my childhood,the life is absolutely brighter than the former,for which the economic boom and our material life is more abundant.Most of family can live a so comfortable life that not struggle for food.On the contrary,the quickened pace of life is not suitable for everyone,which has increased the rate of mental diseases.What's more,the policy of "only have one child"lead some social problem,such as supporting the old,lacking the spirt of dependence and feeling lonely.

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