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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8968
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分47.0分
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文章衔接手法恰当;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用;作者能较灵活的使用词汇,可是单词拼写还需加强。

用户练习作文:

For my opinion,I think there are three reasons to exaplain why it is unwise to judge a person by their appearence,First,juding a person from their apppearance is unoverwhelming.We just see the surface not the essence.Everyone has internal and entertal characteristics.We can judge internal characteristics from their appearence.We can acquaint their enternal charastics through the days we get along with.Second,it means unpolite to judge a person from what they look like.If a person looks handsome or stunning it doesn't mean he or she is a good man.Converslly,he may be a good person even he isn't goodlooking.Thirdly,it contains predijuce to judge a person from their appearence.It may leads to some misunderstanding or arguement if we doesn't know a person well. In several words,it is unoverwhelming,unpolite,and unrespectful way to judge a person from their appearance,therefore,it is unwise to do it.

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