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文章结构严谨，有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分；句式变化较为明显，句法基础不错；文中词汇表达灵活多样，也能较熟练地使用一定的高级词汇。
Dear Sir of Madam As a senior student of this university,I do appreciate the valuable service in the radio station where I offen spent my spare time relaxing and knowing real time.Meanwhile,I feel that it would be beneficial to express my views concerning the quality of the radio station. I can find no better suggestions other than the following two.To begin with,during the break,we need some music or joke and the like let the brain relax,it would be helpfor if you could offer us such entertainments.Besides,I hope that there would be more time related to English,since students spent less time to study English when they come into the college. I would like to extend my greatest appreciation if you are so kind as to take my suggestions serious consideration and I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yous sincerelly Li Ming
