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可适当增加文中长句和复杂句的使用；文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但高级词汇稍显不足；文章结构严谨，有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分。
Dear Sir of Madam As a senior student of this university,I do appreciate the valuable service in the radio station where I often spent my spare time to relax and know real time.Meanwhile,I feel that it would be beneficial to express my views concerning the quality of the radio station. I can find no better suggestions other than the following two.To begin with,during the break,we need some music or joke and the like let the brain relax,it would be helpfor if you could offer us such entertainments.Besides,I hope that there would be more time related to English,since students spent less time to study English when they come into the college. I would like to extend my greatest appreciation if you are so kind as to take my suggestions serious consideration and I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yous sincerely Li Ming
