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高级词汇需要继续积累，单词拼写不错；可适当增加文中长句和复杂句的使用；文章结构严谨，有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分。
Dear Sir of Madam As a senior student of this university,I do appreciate the valuable service in the radio station where I often spent my spare time in relaxing and knowing real time.Meanwhile,I feel that it would be beneficial to express my views concerning the quality of the radio station. I can find no better suggestions other than the following two.To begin with,during the break,we need some music or joke and the like let the brain relax,it would be helpful if you could offer us such entertainments.Besides,I hope that there would be more time related to English,since students spent less time in studying English when they come into the college. I would like to extend my greatest appreciation if you are so kind as to take my suggestions serious consideration and I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yous sincerely Li Ming
