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4、 生活是美好的，要充分享受每一分钟。
2．短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺，文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息．
作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文中缺乏丰富的词汇表达，但词汇拼写要更加认真；过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当，缺少组织，可适当增加连接词的使用。
Dear Kitty Thank you and Mr Wu for invinting me to your school trip to Beijing World Park. I know you always have many tests,so I guess you must under the presstures.You must always feel bored too.I think you should go to the nature in the weekend.And you can enjoy the beautiful season and the nature.you can also listen some music to relax yourself. You can tell your pressture to your friends and your parents too. After all,our lives are beautiful, we should enjoy every minutes in our lives.
