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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40876
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
用户的作文(系统评分76.5分
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过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;可适当增加文中长句和复杂句的使用;文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但高级词汇稍显不足。

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There is a significant view that it is not sensible for getting a conclusion immediately when you're seeing and hearing.Funny as it is, the saying ironically reflects the fact that when we treat we should rethink it before we do. Our life involves all kinds of obstacles and setbacks which may exhaust us. Therefore, it if of great importance fou us to realize it is a ruthless behaviour that drew a conclusion when we see things. What's more, it may put us on a slippery slope. For example, people used to judge a person who is right or wrong according to his or her appearance rather than their real heart. As a result of this, it often exerts a bad effect between them. And because of that people around them may feel embarrassing and their groupe won't work well. Obviously, the things mentioned above must have a great concern and attention deserved. All in all, only in a correct way that we should rethink things before we do, can we have a good mood in our life.

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