采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;采用了一些简单的从句;文章用词太过单一,且单词拼写错误较多。
Today, my foreign friend is going to visit my hometown,it is a beautiful city in china,it name is xinhua.this is a very beautiful pleace,so many people like travel to here.I belive that my friend like it too.the here have brautiful scenery,for example,big bear mountain have very beautiful waterfall,overtime, it is a highest mountain in my hometown. purple magpie world have very spectacular terraces.I think that my friend must to very like it.