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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71614
要求:
Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;采用了一些简单的从句;文章用词太过单一,且单词拼写错误较多。

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Today, my foreign friend is going to visit my hometown,it is a beautiful city in china,it name is xinhua.this is a very beautiful pleace,so many people like travel to here.I belive that my friend like it too.the here have brautiful scenery,for example,big bear mountain have very beautiful waterfall,overtime, it is a highest mountain in my hometown. purple magpie world have very spectacular terraces.I think that my friend must to very like it.

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