2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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Today, my foreign friend is going to visit my hometown,it is a beautiful city in china,it name is xinhua.This is a very beautiful pleace,so many people like travel to here.I believe that my friend like it too.The here have brautiful scenery,for example,big bear mountain have very beautiful waterfall,overtime, it is an highest mountain in my hometown. Purple magpie world have very spectacular terraces.I think that my friend must to very like it.