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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71658
要求:
Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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Guangzhou,a developed city in China which is my hometown. As the saying gose"eating in Guangzhou",what does mean is all kinds of delicious food are waiting for you in Guangzhou.As an old city in China,tradictional foods become the features of Guangzhou.As all kinds of dimsum,many foods are popular with the people who come from all over the world.So if you will come to Guangzhou,i will take you to taste the delicious food in Guangzhou. As the city which ahead of the Reform and opening up of China,the economic and the cultural of Guangzhou are different from other city in China.So if you come to Guangzhou,you will experience what the Reform and opening up make a deep impression on the development of China.

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