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Nowadays,most people tend to talk more about the ties between competition and cooperation,which is more important in the present day society,and which is more suitable in the modern time.Some people think that cooperation is essential for human's process because the team work pattern can make them stronger,and work together is link to human nature.So they advocated people to keep this spirit and keep its life.However,the others do not agree with that.They claim that competition more important than cooperation in the modern society.As for me,I agree the second views more,and the reasons are mainly as follows: First of all,in a sense,the modern means compete and challenge,which means the competition is a huge power that can urge people to make more great achievements.Secondly,competition can push people to pursuit their dreams and work harder in their development.They must learn and practice more skills in order to improve themselves,and that is also the only way that they can get what they want.People will learn more from the competitive world.The last but not least,just like darwinism said the fittest survival,under the principle most people will pay more attention to enrich themselves so as not to be left behind of the world.And that is the key point why human can survive in the world for thousands of years.It always warns us keep move and make it count. To sum up,the competitive society will be better for people to live.And people will have a more wonderful live environment because of it.
