2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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If a fireign friend of mine is going to visit my hometown ,i will take to see shaolinshi ,and shong mantain . because i am from Henan province ,the shaolin is the popularest interestingplace .Every year there are many people from foreign to visit. Shong mantain is also the foumers interestingplace and it conclude many big and small mantain.