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The Impact Of The Internet On Interpersonal Communication With the development of econony, more and more people have the chance to contact the computer, and the inter also make people who live in difference place have the channel to make new friends. But internet has it advantage and disvantage, which depend on how you use it.The internet have variety advantage,such as it can contact people which live difference place, strengthen their communication, let people can make more and more friends which have common interesting. But internet also have it disadvantage, sometimes we may neglect the people who are around us, we used to talk our secret to the stranger rather than our family or friend, in a long time, the relationship between us and our friends,family will be far. Internet has it advantage and it disadvantage, we should use it truely, in the same time, we shouldn't ignore the people who are always around us.
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