2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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Visit china,you can't miss it,my hometown beihai of guangxi.In here,with beautiful coast and blue sky.you stand here,you feel it and you will love it for the sweet air ,the breeze.the water is clearn for swimming.we also can fishing.with the night,there is so much dilicious food.We would full our's moust.you come here,and you will never want to leave it.