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I have a good friend .She is a beautiful girl with long and balck hair,black and big eyes,dedicated nose and also a slim face.Most of all ,she is always kind of everyone. She is good at learning English and is favoritable with arts like painting.She is acute and adorable.There were monments that I imagined I would be the prince of her.